Writer's Support Room - Open Forum Transcripts

Event start time: Tue Oct 16 13:09:21 2007
Event end time: Tue Oct 16 14:07:48 2007


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janfields Welcome to Afternoon Open Forum at the Institute of Children's Literature, I'm your moderator and resident pontificator, Jan Fields. We open topic, so feel free to send up any questions you may have today...
janfields If you want to ask a question and be sure it has a chance to be posted, you'll need to use either the "ask a question" button on the bar across the middle of your screen. OR type /ask...then space once and type your question. That passes the question to me and I can post it for answer. If you type the question in the bar at the bottom of your screen, I may not see it.
janfields I'm going to start by answering some questions from Jessica in the audience since it's relevent to a lot of folks...
janfields Jessica has a story coming out in a Chicken Soup book (yay Jessica) and is looking for book signing venues
janfields And how to handle the book sales.
janfields So, if you're signing somewhere other than a book store
janfields you will need to bring your own stock
janfields That means you need to bring someone to handle the stock -- the author MUST NEVER be the seller
janfields It doesn't look good
janfields it makes you look rinky dink...so bring someone to do that part
janfields And you just be there to sign.
janfields And it's just better to work in teams anyway...book signings are far less stressful if you're not alone.
janfields You'll need a tax number if you're acting as your own book seller.
janfields And you'll need to collect the appropriate sales tax
janfields You can take cash or checks...you won't get a lot of bad checks.
janfields But you won't be able to take credit cards, and that makes a lot of shoppers pass you up.
janfields That's one reason why a lot of people avoid bookselling.
janfields If you can work with a retail place (like a beauty parlor for example, if the book would relate somehow) -- some of the Chicken Soup books are pretty specialized.
janfields Then you can sometimes get them to handle sales under their own sales tax and credit card abilities.
janfields If I were choosing venues, I would think of the audiences most interested in the book, and where they go...
janfields libraries certainly.
janfields But, again, with a Chicken Soup book, sometimes the focus of the book will help you choose.
george kulz Can it be just anyone to bring the stock? Like, for instance, if I unlisted some unlucky friend or relative to be my representative? :-)
janfields Right, it doesn't matter who handles the sales, just don't let it be you personally.
janfields The extra person will put that padding between you and the buyer
janfields that will make it clear that you are the WRITER
janfields Otherwise, people figure you self-published and that can carry a stigma with the buyer.
janfields If you're selling from your stock, from the books the publisher gave you --
janfields be sure to check your contract to be certain you're allowed to sell those copies.
janfields Sometimes you're not.
janfields If you actually buying books to sell -- again, be sure that's allowed in contract
janfields Some publishers actually disallow authors doing that because they don't want authors competing with book stores.
janfields But if it's allowed, you should be able to buy books from the publisher at discounted prices.
chippy Are you not allowed to take credit card payments, or can you use the portable credit card machine
janfields If you're already set up to take credit cards because of some other business you have...you can certainly do so.
janfields But a lot of authors don't want to deal with credit cards
janfields because of the low volume of sales and the huge bite the company takes out of each sale.
janfields You can find youself making nothing at all on credit card sales
janfields I hope that helped muddy the waters :-)
ccollier I sold signed copies of my books at my cousin's gardening
ccollier center but she got 30Y
ccollier that's 30 percent
janfields That works great if you can sell at some place that is already set up to deal retail sales
janfields Even if they don't normally sell books
janfields It takes a lot of pressure off you for the mechanics of the sale
janfields But you can also easily end up with a whole lot of no profit.
janfields So you have to be doing it for the promotion -- word of mouth about you as an author.
janfields Okay...Onward.
gonewest When doing something for Fun for Kidz Mag it is more showing
gonewest than telling - are alot of pictures appropriate?
gonewest Do you know if they have to be digital pictures?
janfields You can use digital or regular film...if digital, it needs to be high quality.
janfields The key with photos for the Bluffton group is -- will they look good in black and white?
janfields Color covers a multitude of sins in a photo and a nice color photo can become confusing in black and white.
janfields So they have to still look good in black and white.
janfields They do like photos -- very much.
janfields They don't actually demand "showing over telling" in nonfiction nearly to the degree that Highlights does.
janfields Highlights is probably the most "show don't tell" in nonfiction.
janfields Then the Cricket group.
janfields The Bluffton group is really flexible ...they need such short nonfiction that they know it's hard to show.
janfields They also don't expect a lot of direct quotes like Highlights does.
janfields They have several nonfiction pieces on the site, so it's good to read them and see what they run.
gonewest Can I just send in my pictures from my 35 mm?
janfields Sure, if they are good clear photos.
janfields I know they've run 35 mm photos...be sure the prints are protected during the mailing.
janfields Use a photo mailer or some kind of sandwich of stiff cardboard around them.
mk1 Would it be appropriate to send photos with a fiction story
janfields If you have a photo/photos that you think illustrate it really well, maybe better than art -- then I would go for it.
janfields Keep in mind they will really have to be a good match for the magazine to use them.
janfields But they might also be used for illustration reference.
janfields It won't ever hurt a submission.
janfields Unless the photos are really poor...then it might.
chippy When you gt rights on a story here, can you publish it in another country as well?
janfields It depends upon what rights you sold...for example, if you sell "First North American Rights" -- you can resell to other countries (except Canada)
janfields But if you just sell "First Rights" you can't sell until the first publisher runs it.
janfields And if you sell All Rights, then you can't sell it to any other publisher anywhere in the world.
janfields So, it depends.
chippy Q id 18788 I should have said when the publisher gets the rights
janfields Right...so it depends on what rights the publisher got from you in the contract exchange.
janfields If there was no contract, then the rights automatically default to "one time use" and you can sell it anywhere you like.
janfields Though if you sell to a competing market, you'll really tick off the first one.
gonewest When you sell something with "all rights" can you revise and
gonewest sell it to another magazine?
janfields "All Rights" includes the right to sell a derrivative work
janfields Therefore to sell the piece, it would have to not be clearly derrived from the first one
janfields So you could do another article on that topic...but you would need a totally new focus
janfields Some different sources
janfields A different tone and approach.
janfields You may use the same fact in both...because a straight fact is actually not copyrightable
janfields But if you're using all the same facts and just rewording, that would not be enough of a difference to avoid the derrivative works issue.
janfields You would really need a new approach.
janfields For example, say I did a story on Robert Peary's trip to the North Pole and sold it for All Rights (which I'm about to)
janfields I could do a story on Arctic Expedition (in general) and mention some facts from the Peary expedition
janfields But I would really be doing a different article with a different focus.
gonewest Is that the same if you're doing a craft toy?
janfields If you've designed a craft and sold it all rights -- then the thing really doesn't belong to you anymore.
janfields I did that once with a teddy bear I had designed
janfields It was quite a unique construction...and after I sold it to Teddy Bear and Friends for all rights (and lots of money) it wasn't mine anymore
janfields They could sell the design to a company and manufacture the thing and not pay me a dime.
janfields But...I could still design other teddy bears -- they didn't buy my ability to make bears.
janfields On a smaller scale...say you sold a craft to Highlights for a space shuttle that raced up a string.
janfields You could sell someone else a similar mechanism, but with a different design...like a monkey that raced up a string.
janfields And as long as the directions sounded well different
janfields and the visual was clearly different
janfields you would be fine.
janfields Because methods in crafts really aren't copyrighted...they are too fundamental.
janfields WeeWillieWinkie: With each publishing house having its own ideas about what is acceptible in YA stories, is there a current list about what is taboo subjects or no-nos when writing for YAs?

janfields The YA taboos have really stretched a lot in the last years.
janfields You can find a house that will buy just about any "taboo subject"
janfields But, in general, it is hard to sell...
janfields oral sex in a YA book (though a whole book was published based on the urban legend of rainbow parties)
janfields college kids in a YA book (though Nancy Werlin's Killer's Cousin had a college student for the main character)
janfields married main characters in YA (though if the book is set in a different culture, it's easier)
janfields And any time you make an "edgy" choice that is going to get librarians a lot of flack...
janfields you're cutting into the sales base...
janfields and publishers know that so they're going to look very closely to see...
janfields if they believe the book is good enough to sell or to win awards...even with the problems it creates in the marketplace.
mk1 Does the mc in a story always have to have the" last word"
janfields I'm not sure I understand the question...but I think the answer would be no.
janfields The main character does need to be the one who drives the action.
janfields We need the sense that without the main character and his choices and actions, the story could never have happened.
janfields But you can have something result in the another character needing to "pick up" the story a bit near the end.
janfields And you can certainly close with dialogue that isn't the main chracter's
janfields The key is to have the overall story clearly be vital to the MC and driven by him/her.
janfields WeeWillieWinkie: Is it my imagination or are publishing houses that allowed unsolicated manuscripts in the past starting to get away from that?


janfields No, alas, not your imagination.
janfields Publishers are drowning in slush...so they are trying different things to combat that.
janfields Most publishers don't really want to have no submissions -- no submissions mean no books.
janfields And they don't want only subs from past authors, because that means no shot at brilliant new authors.
janfields What they want is to stop reading slush.
janfields So some close except for certain points in the year, like Carol Rhoda.
janfields Some close to manuscripts but allow queries.
janfields Some close to anyone who doesn't have an agent -- but the problem with that is that, deep down, publishers hate agents.
janfields Agents make publisher's pay more
janfields Agents make publisher's change contract terms.
janfields Agents slow down the process.
janfields So, publishers would love to see manuscripts without agents as long as they only saw good manuscripts.
janfields Some are using contests to accept unagented manuscripts.
janfields Most publishers send editors to conferences with the direction that they will recieve unagents manuscripts from conference attendees for a time.
janfields And one Christian publisher...hmmm Thomas Nelson, I think...actually uses one of those "showcase services" to screen submissions.
janfields All of this is because the manuscripts come in floods...thousands of them.
janfields More than they can read.
janfields More than they can process.
janfields And many of these are by people who either (1) have no idea about publishing,
janfields (2) no idea of what that publisher publishers
janfields (3) and limited ability.
janfields So, publishers have to wade through thousands of inappropriate subs, hoping to find a good one.
janfields And that...my friends, leads to grumpy editors.
janfields I don't think we'll ever see a day when publishers don't accept submissions somehow
janfields but I do believe things are going to continue to change as publishers look for ways to deal with the money draining slush realities.
mk1 What are showcase services?
janfields Those are companies that offer to put your manuscript up on a website
janfields password protected
janfields and then "member agents and publishers"
janfields are allowed to read the manuscripts to see if they want to make an offer on them.
janfields They are not used by most publishers
janfields But I do know Thomas Nelson uses one...you can find the name of the one they use in their manuscript guidelines.
janfields Most of the time, those services just take your money and get you a lot of spam from vanity presses and scam agents.
ccollier I got the ICL magazine market guide yesterday
janfields Yay, I know you're been waiting for it.
janfields I just got mine too -- so for those who are ordering them
janfields clearly they are going out now.
janfields Jo: If you have a character who is silently arguing with himself, how would you quote it in in the story? I thought that it wouldn't need quotes, but I was told that it would need them. For example, "Wait!" a voice inside her said. "Do you really want to do that?" "No, I don't," Jo silently argued. "But what else can I do?

janfields Chicago Manual of Style ...which is THE guide for most of that stuff
janfields says you can put quotes on thoughts if you want.
janfields I know some publishers are fine with that and some are not.
janfields So I generally rephrase to avoid it -- but it's not going to make an editor hate you.
janfields If it feels like the right way to go...go for it. Just make sure it doesn't become too attention getting.
janfields And be aware that it is VERY VERY confusing if you do it in a scene where these is also spoken dialogue.
janfields In a situation where you have spoken dialogue and thoughts, I would not put thoughts in quotes.
janfields I would use italics or rephrase to avoid the problem.
janfields Boomer: Is a magazine doesn't take manuscripts or queries, only resumes -- does that mean they won't be interested in a writer who doesn't have a lot of publication credits?
janfields Pretty much, yeah.
janfields If they are asking for a resume, they want to see if you
janfields (1) have written for a magazine/book publisher at a comparable level to them.
janfields or
janfields (2) if you are an expect in the field about which you are writing.
janfields Otherwise, you can tend to pass on places that JUST let you send a resume.
janfields If they'll take a sample ALSO...you have a shot at winning them over with your sample.
janfields But if all they want is a resume...leave that one until you have some high quality sales.
janfields Boomer: Could you explain the difference between primary and secondary sources -- are interviews the only kind of primary source?
janfields A primary source is an interview from someone intimately involved in the subject -- a researcher, a historian, someone at the subject event...
janfields But it can also be a document directly involved in the event...
janfields court case documents
janfields journals and letters of people involved.
janfields It's primary if you've got something directly touching the subject ...it's secondary when you've got something created by someone who collected sources to write about the subject.
gonewest If they ask for a resume and your's is short can you sneek
gonewest in a piece of your work?
janfields I'm a firm believer in "try anything" but do it knowing you're facing a pretty stiff chance of rejection.
janfields Ultimately, the whole resume thing is to get the writers who can handle the job.
janfields So if you feel they would be swayed by your actual work...heck, sneak it in.
janfields The worst that happens is that they say no.
janfields We're supposed to be used to being told no.
janfields Though...well...it always hurts some.
mk1 By "work", do you mean a whole story - or chapter ?
janfields Hmmm...I probably mean...3 pages or less. If you sent more than 3 pages.. without being asked, they aren't going to even glance at them 'cause you'll just make them mad.
janfields But if you know you could totally wow them in one or two pages, I don't know know of an editor who wouldn't glance at that.
janfields So, that's not likely to be a chapter...I might be a story or article, depending...but mostly you're going to be sending more of a fragment.
janfields When I've sent stuff to publishers asking for resumes and samples...
janfields I will send something I already have if it's a perfect match...
janfields and I'll write something if I don't have a good match on hand.
janfields That slows up the package, of course, because a rough draft won't impress anyone (least ways my rough drafts won't)
janfields So you need to do something really polished and strong.
chippy So you want to send them a taste not a main course
janfields Right. Though if I'm sending a sample to a publisher who accepts samples, I'll send something at the length they ask for.
janfields Sometimes if a publisher asks for samples, they want a feeling of completeness
janfields so I would send a full article, a full story, or a full chapter.
janfields Unless there are page limits to prevent that.
janfields I've been known to cut something I have on hand to make it fit the page limit of the sample and still give a sense of "finished piece"
janfields Okay, that's all the questions I have -- I want to let folks know...
janfields the eNews will be going out on Thursday this week...
janfields I'm trying a new schedule to see if it works better at getting into your email boxes...
janfields And our next Open Forum is on October 26 -- it's a night forum.
janfields I'll be here to hang out next Tuesday, of course.
janfields Thanks y'all

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