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Event start time: Tue Nov 21 13:00:40 2006
Event end time: Tue Nov 21 14:05:10 2006


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janfields November 21, OPEN FORUM CHAT begins in 2 minutes. Join us while talk about the trials, tribulations and challenges of the writing life -- and maybe a chuckle or two!
janfields Welcome to OPEN FORUM CHAT with webeditor Jan Fields. Pull up a chair as we talk about writing.
janfields I suspect I'm talking to myself today.
janfields If anyone wants to pop in and ask a question -- I'm here for you.
janfields But I know I usually come in early. I had a "mommy" emergency.
janfields Ahhh...Coloradokate and sweetpolly are here.
janfields Hi, if you can here me.
janfields Unfortunately, the chat software refuses to let me be in two places at one time today.
janfields I have no idea why.
coloradokate So this is the only way you can hear us?
janfields Yes, I'm sorry...today it is.
janfields I know that stinks.
janfields Anyway, I thought I would pontificate on something I was asked in email...
janfields concerning Highlights...and "all rights" policies in general.
janfields First, I think we're moving into a time when more and more magazines are going to demand "all rights"
janfields For a couple of reasons.
janfields One -- they can.
janfields Basically, there are enough talented writers producing material that magazines know they will get enough submissions -- even if some folks refuse to submit to all rights markets.
janfields Two, it's a function of the multi-platform publishing that many magazines are doing now.
janfields They have a print issue.
janfields An internet version.
janfields And sometimes print book anthologies and such.
janfields If they buy something for "all rights" -- they can use it in all the media for one price.
janfields And they can stagger the use so that it feels "fresh" each time.
janfields Third, it's money -- magazines are feeling the same pinch in children's editions as the adult mags are...
janfields but children's magazines suffer more because they often don't have the advertising revenue of adult magazines.
janfields And "all rights" is the most cost efficient purchase...especially if you don't have to pay more for it.
janfields So -- my crystal ball says "all rights -- all the time" is inevitable.
coloradokate I entered the Pockets contest. They named the winner on 11/1 and said on their website they mailed back the non-winners' SASEs except for about 30 they were holding. I haven't heard anything, personally--wouldn't they tell me if they were holding mine???
janfields Considering the efficiency of the average magazine
janfields I think it's too early to be sure...they may be holding yours
janfields They may have lost your SASE
janfields They may have mailed it in someone else's SASE
janfields If you haven't heard by the end of November -- I would drop them a line and ask.
janfields It wouldn't be pushing and they wouldn't think you're demanding.
ccollier Jan, do you retain your rights back once a magazine goes und
janfields If you sold "one time use" and the magazine folds -- all rights revert to you.
janfields If you sold "first rights" and the magazine folds, technically, you should contact the magazine and "take back" the first right of publication.
janfields If you sold "all rights" and the magazine folds -- they still own it unless you write and request that rights revert to you.
janfields Most of the time, the defunct magazine is happy to give your rights back since they don't need them.
janfields But if they went bankrupt -- TECHNICALLY -- the right to an "all rights" manuscript is part of their assets and become part of the proceeding.
janfields At least, that's how a lawyer 'splained it to me.
coloradokate LOL... and sigh... Thanks.
janfields Yeah, really, this business can be a little crazy making.
janfields But just about the time you think it's just too nuts -- something lovely happens.
janfields So, maybe you're about to be hit with a "something lovely"
janfields Now, something else I wanted to pontificate on about Highlights
janfields Highlights shares money with the writer when they resell something.
janfields That has always been their policy.
janfields But it is not LEGALLY required of them.
janfields They buy all rights -- and there is nothing in the contract promising you any money.
janfields And if you move or otherwise make it tough to find you -- they won't work too hard to track you down.
janfields But in virtually all cases I've heard -- they send a check whenever she sell something to another publisher.
janfields Like a testing company.
janfields Or even TV (one Highlights story sold to Disney).
janfields Some folks have reported quite a bit of money that way.
janfields But realistically --it could stop at any point.
janfields Highlights is feeling some of the financial crunch that is effecting all magazines.
janfields They have the foundation behind them, and that helps, but we're seeing a lot of magazines under pressure.
janfields Right now, the CBHI magazines are still not really buying anything from anyone.
janfields And a lot of the smaller magazines have just folded in the last 12 months.
janfields So -- it's probably not a time when writers have much leverage to demand change.
janfields I actually asked a Highlights editor if they had ever let anyone negotiate a contract for anything less than all rights.
janfields And she only remembered one case -- an article written by a former president of the United States.
janfields So -- if you get to be president - I think you'll have a shot.
janfields Now, while I'm idling away to see if anyone has any questions...or if I should keep babbling.
janfields I wanted to remind everyone that the next GUEST chat will be Dianne de las Casas
janfields Which should be super super cool.
janfields Plus, I wanted to say that I got the prizes in the mail yesterday for the big treasure hunt drawing we're going to be running
janfields Very cool.
coloradokate What's your opinion on nonpaying or very low-paying (one cent a word) markets like some of the new online magazines?
janfields I think if you like the quality of the magazine
janfields and you have a story that has already made the rounds of paying markets
janfields there is nothing wrong with "selling" to a low pay/no pay internet magazine.
janfields I would be very careful about the 'quality' issue though.
janfields If the stuff in the eZine seems not really very good -- DON'T contribute.
janfields Honesty, you are judged by the company you keep.
janfields Now, having said that -- I was once offered a book contract based on some writing I did for an eZine.
janfields The editor happened to have seen the article (found it in a google search) and liked it
janfields and wanted that kind of voice/tone/research for a nonfiction book for teens
janfields And offered me a chance to do it.
janfields So, if you do let an eZine have your story -- you still want to make sure the story/article itself reflects well on you.
janfields If it goes online with typos -- ask the editor to fix it.
janfields Make sure anything you put out to the public puts a good face on your work.
janfields Now, having said that -- I have written stuff for low pay sites...but the only no-pay site I ever contributed to was KidMagWriters
janfields Still...I think it doesn't do you any harm as long as (1) the site looks good and professional, and (2) your piece reflects well on you.
eggamy Does This type of market still count as a publishing crdit.
janfields Yes...and no.
janfields I would use it only as a credit if I were trying to sell a similar sort of piece.
janfields For example, the article that I mention above was on Teens and Guns.
janfields If I were writing a proposal for any kind of teen nonfiction -- I cited that article
janfields Because (1) it was easy to find
janfields (2) I was proud of it.
janfields and (3) the site was nicely done.
janfields But I would never use it as a credit for a children's picture book
janfields or as a credit for a Highlights article
janfields Because the site itself didn't have any prestige
janfields I would use it just to showcase my experience with that type or article.
janfields Does that make sense?
janfields With 99% of online publishing, the site itself has no sway with an editor
janfields But it can be a way to point an editor at another example of you doing a specific type of writing well.
janfields The easy accessibility is actually very nice.
janfields Editors SAY they don't look for stuff online...but some actually do.
bechu Do you send all experts you interviewd copies of the story?
janfields No, I don't
janfields In fact, I am ashamed to admit...I never seen experts a copy of the story
janfields UNLESS I need them to read it and tell me if I got the science/technology/whatever right
janfields BUT...many many writers do send copies of the stories to the expert.
janfields It's a nice gesture.
janfields The reason I don't is probably because I began my writing life in journalism
janfields And I have a journalism degree.
janfields And my instructors/newspaper editors pounded it in my head that you NEVER EVER let sources see the article.
janfields So it's a habit I never picked up.
janfields Which probably gets my name in "rude" box for some of my experts.
janfields Alas
janfields Any questions?
janfields Y'all aren't making jokes about me over there where I can't see them are you?
janfields This lack of vision in the other room makes me very paranoid.
janfields Hmmm...oh, by the way, I got the first draft of my book for the book packager done.
janfields Are y'all impressed?
coloradokate We're not whispering about you, really Jan! Congrats on the draft!
janfields Thank you...now I just hope it make sense.
janfields I had to wander from the outline slightly...like the introduction of blood sucking plants.
wee willie winkie I think you sre losing your audience here
janfields I'm so sorry...but I have no questions to answer.
janfields Hit me with a question...come on...something tough.
coloradokate How's the move going?
janfields Great, we're in the new house.
janfields I have almost no boxes upstairs to open.
janfields I hate my bedroom configuation...but I'll figure it out.
janfields I haven't seen deer yet, but I'm hopeful.
eggamy Is the ICL student center open to former students like me
janfields Yes, if you have a student number...you can enter the student center.
janfields You'll find some great articles in there, by the way, that aren't accessible anywhere else on the site.
janfields If your student number is balky for you -- just contact student services and they should fix you up.
rainchain Some rumors on Verla board seem to say CBHI is not accepting
rainchain Have you heard anything about CBHI lately
janfields CBHI (in my opinion...which must be right) is probably suffering more than a lot of magazines.
janfields They are basically overextended.
janfields Too many magazines, all doing the same thing.
janfields So they are cutting costs where they can
janfields And that primarily means no buying of new material.
janfields I talked to an editor about it a while back
janfields And this editor said there probably isn't going to be a change anytime soon.
janfields It's a financial thing.
janfields They have a huge amount of material they've used through the years.
janfields And they can produce magazines for quite a while just pulling that stuff out and dusting it off a bit.
janfields Now, I was told that they will pick up some of the "low cost" items -- mostly seasonal, things like poetry or fillers.
janfields Just to keep some new stuff.
janfields But that's not across the board...some of the CBHI editors have slightly more room than others.
janfields For example, Turtle basically can only buy Rebus stories and poetry (seasonal)
wee willie winkie why were you never allowed to let a source see the story
janfields It was a function of trying to show we were totally independent and unbiased.
janfields The fear was that if you show the source the story, they will want you to slant it a specific way
janfields And won't want you to write anything that makes them look bad.
janfields Kids magazines don't worry about stuff like that.
janfields But newspapers like to consider themselves above bias.
bechu In writing PBs does the author assign material to pages?
janfields No, in virtually all cases, the division of pages to the material is done by the editor/illustrator.
janfields However, having said that -- I know Rick Walton writes his picture books with the text broken by pages.
janfields But then...he's Rick Walton and can probably do what he likes.
janfields And the editor doesn't always abide by his division.
janfields So, you need only write the manuscript like any other -- the editor will divide it up.
ccollier I wonder why Kid Zone isnt listed in the new market book or
janfields Kid Zone is a magazine that doesn't totally know what it wants to do.
janfields A lot of craft publishers are starting to eye the children's market
janfields Because there's money in it.
janfields But they are heavily married to their "craft magazine" way of doing things.
janfields With Kid Zone, it's meant a magazine that is "sort of" a kid's magazine.
janfields And because it's still Semi-experimental, it's a magazine where the editor is HEAVILY overloaded
janfields So she probably asked it be removed from the guides to cut back on submissions.
janfields Which can drown you fast when you're a one-woman editorial
rainchain If I have a story idea is it best to decide genre and then
rainchain write or write and then figure out what I have?
janfields I know folks who do it both ways and have good success.
janfields For me, I generally know where I am going before I start the journey.
janfields I always have my "ideal reader" in my mind's eye.
janfields I know the most likely markets.
janfields I'm sort of...market oriented...in a lot of ways.
janfields But I equally know people who spill out stuff...then look for what they find it in.
janfields Like reading tea leaves.
janfields Then they revise and revise and revise to get the shape and genre and age targeting and all
janfields to be clear and workable.
janfields It just depends upon what works for you.
coloradokate I was surprised that Dragonfly Spirit still isn't listed, in the 2007 market guide.
janfields That is a surprise. Maybe Gisele is afraid of getting overwhelmed
janfields and feels she's getting enought submissions via word of mouth.
michell p Tell us about the treasure hunt
janfields I'm going to have some questions in this Friday's eNews -- the answers can be found on the ICL site
janfields Everyone who "finds" the answers and sends me an email, get in the drawing.
janfields The books are very cool...and I know ICL is going to throw in a "surprise" gift also.
rainchain Do editors have to request to be in the guide?
janfields No, though they can request NOT to be in the guide.
janfields However, the editors of the guides can only find just so many markets
janfields so some of the new small markets DO contact the guides to make the guidebook editors aware
janfields And editors sometimes hold back to see if a magazine/eZine looks like it's going to last
janfields I know of one ezine that's had a number of incarnations and names and foci and when an eZine does a lot of that, it makes market guides wary of listing them.
rainchain Can I get a 2007 guide if I'm half thru the course?
janfields You can get one through the online bookstore...but I don't believe you'll get one automatically via the course.
stretch Hi everyone, sorry I'm late, what have I missed?
janfields Not much, mostly I babbled a lot.
janfields Unusually high babble quotient today.
janfields So...any other questions?
janfields huh huh huh?
rainchain Do you notice small words like "her" as echos when
rainchain overused in a piece?
janfields Any word can be overused and become attention getting.
janfields The best way to find out if that's the case is to read the manuscript aloud.
janfields For me, I read them aloud into a tape recorder
janfields And then play it back...I catch about half the problems while reading...and the others while listening.
janfields You will see an amazing number of things that way -- like flat places where you overused the same sentence structure
janfields poor speech tags
janfields overuse of character names
janfields weak dialogue.
janfields It's invaluable.
eggamy Which packger are you working with Jan?
janfields It's a company that has only done craft books in the past (they do all the Annie's Attic stuff)
janfields But they are branching out into the children's field
janfields especially girls.
janfields So...they are really feeling their way as they go.
janfields I get a lot of emails that say things like..."So how is this sort of thing usually handled?"
janfields Amazing.
coloradokate What is reality?
janfields It's a construct designed to make me look weird.
rainchain Well some words like the can't be changed so I was
rainchain wondering if pronouns seem to be an issue
janfields Most of the time, not, but sometimes what you'll realize is that you need to rephrase the whole sentence
janfields Sometimes the problem isn't in the use of the pronoun....but in the use of identical sentence contructs that produce the pronoun in the same spot over and over
bechu Say something about ghostwriting, is it professional?
janfields Sure, I know some WONDERFUL writers who have also done ghostwritten books.
janfields Well, including me :-)
janfields It isn't always as creative, but it can be as challenging as any other writing.
janfields Especially when you need to mimic a pre-existing style that isn't similar to your own.
bechu Have you heard of Outskirts publishers, how are they?
janfields I'm sorry, I don't think I have.
janfields There are so many micropresses out there.
janfields Be careful that it's not a vanity press
janfields And before you go with a micro press...read one of their books.
janfields I've read quite a few books by tiny presses...and...well, sometimes I wouldn't want to be part of that book line.
janfields Again...like in an eZine...you will be judged by the company you keep.
janfields Even if your book is wonderful, if the other books in their line are substandard...it reflects badly on you.
janfields Plus, many of the tiny presses have HORRIBLE distribution
janfields Meaning you end up handselling your books.
janfields Not a way to build much audience.
janfields Ah-ha! It's 3pm and I actually answered some questions.
janfields Thank you, thank you, thank you for asking some.
janfields I was feeling kind of bummed.
janfields And if anyone runs into dragonlady -- tell her I wasn't ignoring her.
janfields My daughter had to come home early from school -- she's peanut allergie and had some tainted Chinese food.
janfields So I only LOOKED like I was online.
janfields Thanks for coming everyone -- out next chat will be December 7
coloradokate Sorry you couldn't hear us in the peanut gallery out here... Thanks for the chat, & I hope the wee girlie's better.
janfields Actually, I hear here eating cheese puffs...I think she's healed.
janfields Hey, since chat is over...I'm coming out there.

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